Design Wings Coming Soon Page
captonjohn (347 pencils) | Mon, 2011-02-28 10:25
This is a coming soon page for my upcoming design studio named "Design Wings". Comments please.
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is this a direct translation into english from another language?
sounds like an indian cab driver.
"where are you like to be going to for here today"
You may also want to update your copyright to this year so that it looks like you are not taking too long to come up with a design.
Clean and sexy design, bad copy.
Maybe since you used 'Wings' in your company name, you could change the last two lines to read, "A design studio is hatching and will be ready to launch soon. Keep an eye out!" or something similar.
Also, take the word 'for' out of the first line, ad an extra period to the ellipsis, and change the 'b' in 'But' to lower case.
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