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Charlie D's picture
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Do Not Disturb door knob sign

This is my entry for a contest to design a do not disturb door knob sign commonly seen in hotels. They are look for different ways to communicate "Do not disturb" So my concept is the old cliché "Sleeping like a log" I chose not to put words on so the view has to figure it out when the sign is in the appropriate setting, a hotel room door. Let me know whatch yall think.

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Do Not Disturb door knob sign

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Tigerstorm's picture
1009 pencils

If I saw that on a door.. I would more think they were having a party..
That log could also be taken for a glass of beer and a party hat.. (I'm tired)

Charlie D's picture
384 pencils

I am gonna scrap it, maybe use a photo or maybe draw a better log, or just scrap it all together. I can see the beer thing (I was thinking it myself). Back to the drawing board.

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Greg's picture
311 pencils

A *real* (PSed) picture of a log in a hotel bed!

Anyway, even as it is I LOVE it!!! Great idea!

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dpc's picture
359 pencils

I like it! I do kinda see the beer thing, but not really. It is cleaver. I would change the colors around, i don't like the background, the log color, or the hat color, but the concept is awesome.

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Tigerstorm's picture
1009 pencils

Another way about your sleeping like a log is making the card in Delicious Monster style.. Tree background with perhaps a black symbol or something?

LoveBeingADad's picture
20 pencils

How about laying it horizontal? Most logs are horizontal, most people sleep horizontal, most beer is not... A couple of well placed "Z"s and it is pretty clear.

geoff's picture
118 pencils

I think the cliche is actually a saw sawing a log, isn't it? Otherwise I like it. I think the colour needs a bit of tweaking but I still like it.

pokie's picture
1198 pencils

The log doesn't look like he's sleeping.... first of all, he's sitting upright. How about some Zs or something? I don't know... I'm trying to brainstorm... maybe drooling... but the drool be sap? har har. :P Nothing wrong with at least trying to personify him with a face.

Vortex's picture
20 pencils

change up the colors a bit. the background color is too similar to the color of the log. also try http://creativebits.org/weblink/goto/45 for some color scheme ideas. i also like pokie's idea about the sap ^_^ lol

Ivan's picture

If it's well illustrated I think it's not a cliche since the medium is so approprite to the message.

frankie's picture
41 pencils

personally, at first sight It didn't convey sleeping like a log to me. My first thought was that you were trying to convey "cabin fever", which is a bit different :)

nerdunit's picture
64 pencils

who will be noticing these do not disturb signs? The maids and cleaning personell? If that is the case good luck with them understanding this incinuation.



Otherwise, Id say add a little moon to help out the illustration. I absolutely love it otherwise. HAts off"...

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