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v0d3 (5 points) | Sat, 2007-08-18 18:08

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JimD | Sun, 2007-08-19 02:29

A MySpace page??? WTF are you, 12 years old or something???

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natobasso | Sun, 2007-08-19 03:45

First off, what CreativeGuy is trying to say is what's the creative brief for this piece?

Second, the grammar on this piece is horrible. You need to invest in some good copy written by a professional.

Third, your call to action is flawed. Is it dontpanic.com? This question alone kills the effectiveness of your banner ad; I think it's a banner ad... :)

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tlarson2k | Mon, 2007-08-20 00:46

We can't crit the piece if we don't know what it's for. Natobasso has some good points, so I'd recommend taking their crit into consideration if/when you revise this.

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mara06 | Mon, 2007-08-20 01:45

So long, and thanks for all the phish...

Mara

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ireid | Mon, 2007-08-20 12:48

SPAAAAAAAAMMMMM

"Try not, Do! or do not, there is no try."
-Yoda

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Artfiend | Wed, 2007-08-22 21:15

I want to stab v0d3...

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