Dylan Arlow Promotions

Not bad actually. I have no idea what kind of club or music, but it's nice.

The music genre is House & Electro type stuff.

Thanks for the feedback.

That'll do nicely.

It would look cool as a neon sign!

looks nice and the feel seems appropriate for the client. my only comment is that it's hard to figure out what "dylan arlow" is, since you don't have "promotions" anywhere in the logo. is dylan arlow a singer? a contestant on american idol? a dj? an athlete? a food network host? a hair stylist?

there's just no context with only the name.

Needs some slight tweaking imho. The connected d & l are problematic as is the shortened descender on the y. The proximity of the top line to the bottom is also a little tight. The separator line weight doesn't have to be the same weight as the letters - I think it would help if you reduced that line weight down some (in half?) and broke the connection between the line and the y descender. That kills two birds with one stone. Then break the d where it's supposed to break and cut the l off at the top of the separator line. The tiny line section between l and y might be unnecessary now - delete if it improves the piece. That should solve all the issues and improve readability 100%.

The question? Does that change the "feel" of the piece? Because that's the main selling point right now - it has a nice overall feel to it as is.