Couple of things bother me...The typo as wadhaqb pointed out, and I would move the artwork up a bit, and make the text a little bigger, and possibly straighten up the text rather than angled.
Look at the two arrows. On the "come arrow" there are trail marks. And on the go arrow it is traped inside the box and it can't get out. This brings the feeling of an imported animal in the zoo. Also the inner shodows arent realistic. And why do you have a ? on Easy Come , Easy Go
AquiliaStudio, you completly missed the point of the poster. It is suppose to be for aids and shows that it is easy to get, but hard to get rid of...so the second arrow is not suppose to escape the box. And therefore, there is suppose to be a question mark at the end of the phrase. Overall, I like it but I agree that the text might not need to be angled. Also...I feel like I have seen this someplace before, but I might be wrong. How was this inspired?
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i think thats a awesome concept! great job!
What does 2th stand for...do you mean 2nd??
Couple of things bother me...The typo as wadhaqb pointed out, and I would move the artwork up a bit, and make the text a little bigger, and possibly straighten up the text rather than angled.
Nice concept though.
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Look at the two arrows. On the "come arrow" there are trail marks. And on the go arrow it is traped inside the box and it can't get out. This brings the feeling of an imported animal in the zoo. Also the inner shodows arent realistic. And why do you have a ? on Easy Come , Easy Go
AquiliaStudio, you completly missed the point of the poster. It is suppose to be for aids and shows that it is easy to get, but hard to get rid of...so the second arrow is not suppose to escape the box. And therefore, there is suppose to be a question mark at the end of the phrase. Overall, I like it but I agree that the text might not need to be angled. Also...I feel like I have seen this someplace before, but I might be wrong. How was this inspired?