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andrecavero's picture
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e-llama

This is a logo I've made for my new company.
It's an online marketing company in Lima, Perú (south america).

The main idea behind the design is the 3 concepts that englobe the word "llama", cause the "e" explains itself.

The first idea of "llama" is the animal, native from the highlands here in my country and well known around the globe.

The second is that the word "llama" in spanish means calls, that also lead you to think that with this service you are gonna call the atention of the segement you want and they would call you back.

The third meaning of "llama" is the exclamation mark "!" that you can see reflected in the first logo.

Well it would be an honor to recieve feedback from anybody interested.

Thx

André

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Leaky Penny's picture
2616 pencils

Yeeeeeeeeeeeeah...no.

The itty bitty little lama in the second logo? To small.
Bad choice of font. The "e" sitting on the llamas back? No. What's that weird slant in the cut of the llamas legs?

The first one is the best, but that's just because the other two are weak.

K.I.S.S.

Leaky Penny
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I'm going to print it out and eat it.

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andrecavero's picture
10 pencils

Thank you very much for the comment!
I also like the first one cause it englobes all the things I want!
Thx again! :)

aroberts's picture
262 pencils

+1

Art D. Rector's picture
2771 pencils

Like the top one - but put the whole thing in one red box. Not so sure about the "e" thing though - that looks a little too much like a @ for me. Maybe that's because I'm a stupid American and it's not registering correctly for me?

Totally digging that avatar too! I need to make myself one.

andrecavero's picture
10 pencils

Hahaha not stupid at all!
We want it to be like the @ but with an "e" cause here that thing in the "e" means empresa (that in english means enterprise or company) so putting that in your logo directely associate your company with the online thing and all!!

Bout the avatar if you want send me a pic I'll make yours lol!!

THX :)

3dogmama's picture
1991 pencils

The third one looks like a snail or The Lochness Monster...so no.
Ditto Leaky's comments on the font selection and sizing concern with 2; plus Art's comment about the @ symbol.
The top one screams South American John Deere to me. Maybe as suggested above placing all in one box will help, or just use images...your specialized "e" symbol and the silhouette of a llama...

"Art -- the one achievement of Man which has made the long trip up from all fours seem well advised." - James Thurber

andrecavero's picture
10 pencils

Haha well we came out with the same lochness reference before! but I want some critics on every version of the logo!

Thx for the critiq!

andrecavero's picture
10 pencils

Haha well we came out with the same lochness reference before! but I want some critics on every version of the logo!

Thx for the critiq!

qwertyale's picture
1833 pencils

1- Interesting but I don't like the shapes, both have no integration, they're caothic, very cheapo.
the llama illustration could be a bit small
2- have no power... reduction problems... no thanks.
3- there is no time to storyboard logo. confused.

yes I'm brazilian xD

BlindAcreMedia's picture
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I agree with a few others, I think your first logo is your strongest. I would also suggest putting them in one red box together. This will really create a nice balance.

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