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estate state

Hi,

Here we go again. Thank you for all feedback. There are some new colours and forms. Actually there is no company-concept behind this domain (www.estatestate.com) It's only for sale...so this logo only for practising....are these better?

Thanks
peter

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pimiento's picture
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I prefer the middle one but I think that's because the other ones don't look finished yet.
The top 2 are a real backward step I think - they've lost all their dynamics and the text may as well read 'lorem ipsum'.

On the last post someone said the buildings reminded them of a hat and ever since then it's been bugging me and I finally worked it out... it's the monopoly guy!
http://z.about.com/d/boardgames/1/0/y/h/monopoly_elec_banking_1.jpg
This isn't a criticism or a reason to change it - I'm just glad I got it off my chest.

Art D. Rector's picture
2771 pencils

Agree - the other set was better for me too. The "money look" was obviously helping an underdeveloped idea.

That Monopoly link is funny - "Electronic Banking" edition? Does that mean you buy everything using subprime mortgages and in the end whoever still has their shirt on after the economy collapses is the winner?

qwertyale's picture
1833 pencils

no bills only credit card?

oh seems so boring :P

http://www.thegreenhead.com/imgs/monopoly-electronic-banking-edition-6.jpg

yes I'm brazilian xD

qwertyale's picture
1833 pencils

I CAN'T TRUST in that main blue logo. The typography is like a USED CAR STORE logo or T-SHIRT illustration.

The top logo is on right direction IMO. Only needs a better and serious font

yes I'm brazilian xD

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