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Event postcard

Stratcat31 (49 pencils) | Thu, 2005-08-04 11:10

Hello all,

This is a postcard for an upcoming event for HRAuto.org. I did a lot of "staring into space" on this, but finally made some progress. The image is based off of one I used for their website on the FAQ page (link below). I'd say I'm fairly happy with it, but I always value the feedback or suggestions here and would appreciate any.

http://www.hrauto.org/faqs.html

Thanks! :)

Stratcat31

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joniel | Thu, 2005-08-04 13:00

The picture is very cool. But there are too many "voices", i mean, same typography used in different cases and sizes. I'd keep it simple 1 case --> 1 size. That would be a little more elegant.

One suggestion: why don't you use the arrow you have in the front as bullets for the list you have in the back of the car? they'd feel like brothers. :-)

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Stratcat31 | Fri, 2005-08-05 12:46

Thanks for the suggestions joniel! :)

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