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Extra White Teeth

captonjohn's picture

this is an ad for colgate which makes our teeth extra white then any white thing.

Extra White Teeth
Leaky Penny's picture

Heh heh

I actually kinda of like this..am I weird for that? :P

3dogmama's picture

Smart. You should also see

Smart. You should also see if you can get P&G to fork out the money to print as an insert on a pearl, bright white stock; then run whatever the publication had planned for the pre and post copy on the rear sides of these pages. Having a noticeably brighter white stock might help reinforce Crest's claim.

ttfn!
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KMac's picture

Genius

This is excellent. Genius marketing at work here.

One thing: Can't read the line of text at the bottom - too light.

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captonjohn's picture

is it not readable ?

is the bottom line is not readable? If yes then I'll dark it. I didn't black it because then it disturbs main artwork.

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onegirlcreative's picture

Need to fix wording...

Teeth should NOT be teeths. Already, the word teeth is plural, therefore, you don't need to ad an S to the end. And don't capitalize the word Paste. It doesn't need to be capitalized, just lowercase.

Also, you have an extra A at the end of extra(a). It doesn't need to be there.

Good concept. It speaks on so many levels! Definitely successful.

I would definitely darken it a bit, maybe 80% gray? I definitely wouldn't make it black, but it needs to be seen.

suzanne maestri-walters :: graphic designer :: www.onegirlcreative.com

Doug M.'s picture

I was gonna say the same

I was gonna say the same thing. :)

Doug M.'s picture

I was gonna say the same

I was gonna say the same thing. :)

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