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Fairy Cakes Logo - HELP/INSIGHT

This is a quick mock-up I made for Fairy Cakes Cupcakery. The design is obvious, its a fairy cupcake. I just hand drew the letters too and I'm sure you can tell, lol. Step me through this and I appreciate the help! Thanks.

Fairy Cakes Logo - HELP/INSIGHT

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stephanie's picture
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Very cute! I like the concept a lot.

I think if you maybe simplify a little (icing, etc) it would turn out really nice. Things like the glow around the wand don't add to the logo at all, and just kind of weigh it down.For this particular logo, the simpler the better, imo.

Also, why are the wings set at a lower opacity? It doesn't make them look transparent because the outline is a lower opacity as well.

TylerR_NKY's picture
239 pencils

The concept seems to be on the right track. I don't know what else to really say about it before seeing a rework. The copy needs to be a lot more legible.

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Leaky Penny's picture
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...but it's looking sweet! On top of legibility issues, the font (handwriting) should be a little bolder. Ditto on the wings, ditto on the details in RE so Stephanies comment.

I'm loving this cupcakery idea, and we have a few here in Toronto!

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