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Eivind Johansen's picture
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Fatal Impact

This is my logo proposal for a local hard rock-/metal-band in Gjøvik, Norway. The design is an ambigram which is identical turned upside down or as you see it. I am aware of a certein legibility problem but are set on continuing with the idea.

Update: I have now tried to fix the p/r-problem. I do think this way of doing it breaks the second "a" a little, but it isn't fatal ;)

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Phosphor's picture
201 pencils

Ambigram, eh?

Not the easiest thing to create.

Even tougher to make them easily legible from both directions.

Apfhex's picture
325 pencils

I suppose, legibility aside, it's kinda cool. I dunno, doesn't really scream "fatal impact" to me, maybe I'd have to see it on a CD cover with flames or something. It's hard to critique, as any changes would risk breaking the ambigram.

arvana's picture
111 pencils

I like the concept, and I'd guess that with a little more work, it could get easier to read.

You may have seen these already, but here are some ambigram sites that I have bookmarked. Might have some tricks in there to help you out.

http://ambigram.com/
http://www.johnlangdon.net/
http://www.scottkim.com/inversions/
http://www.almaleh.com/ambi.htm
http://geocities.com/ronalddana/

If somebody knows what yours says beforehand, it's perfectly legible - maybe the trick is to have a subliminal roman font hidden in there somewhere! ;)

Balazs's picture
153 pencils

Reading 'fatalimract' it is, now. R instead of P. Good way to solve it is to loose the upper half of the second 'a' and then make a new 'a' character from the lower part of the 't'. I'm not sure if it's gonna work or not, but theoretically it should :)

Alexander's picture
74 pencils

I think it's gorgeous and clever..

You obviously spent a lot of time making this. I'll also say that the fact that it might be hard to read at first glance could be a positive thing. It Involves people with the logo and make it more interesting for them. (kinda like a quiz)

That's my opinion!

Supert! ;)

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