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nanda's picture
182 pencils

fevicol

this ad for fevicol...

fevicol

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ireid's picture
1283 pencils

I'm lost. . . would I see this while driving on the express-way?

"Try not, Do! or do not, there is no try."
-Yoda

Rick's picture
75 pencils

The exclamation mark looks like an "l".

CREATING HYPE | ENGAGING PEOPLE

gabbous's picture
10 pencils

not too much white empty space?

gururyan's picture
13 pencils

If I'm hauling down the highway at 65+ in traffic, I don't think the 1.5 seconds I have to see this billboard would be enough to grasp the concept AND remember the product name. I also agree with too much empty space, a more readable and larger font would help too...again, particularly if I'm cruising down the highway.

-ryan

Artfiend's picture
70 pencils

type is too small...that red "hand" stuck to the bottle is simply pathetic.

Doug M.'s picture
421 pencils

haha, i agree

tlarson2k's picture
66 pencils

If the can was actually 3D and "stuck" to the billboard at a bizarre angle to simulate the fact it would fall if not for the adhesive qualities of the product, the tagline could work.

However, at this conceptual stage, this isn't adhesive at all.

ryantoyota's picture
6 pencils

I like the concept, but I think the red hand isn't noticable enough... and I'm hoping that's a glove stuck to the billboard, not just an image of a hand. I think something more like a torn shirt stuck to the glue bottle (like the sign installer got so stuck to it he had to tear his shirt off to get free) would be more noticable, flapping in the wind, and would get the concept across better.

julianaduque's picture
168 pencils

Sorry, I didn't get the concept...
Maybe It's just me.

DoghouseMedia's picture
27 pencils

You need to sketch out your ideas before you execute and think about whether or not people will understand them.

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