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The "double image" bothers me a little. Having two focal points. 1 being the container and the other Superman.

I'd rather stick with just the logo of the brand on the bottom, although it might not be as recognised, yet. And Superman a little larger (although life size), and more stuck like a fly on a web. He looks like he's reclining and showing off his pecs.

Otherwise, nice concept!

thanks man. actually iam going to post it on ads.... which i haven't done yet. hoping to see some more comments from others.

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Do you have permission to use Superman for advertising purposes? I'd check on that before you get going much further with the ad campaign - would hate to see you slapped with a lawsuit.

hey hey man this is just for my persional porfolio purpose. i did not wan't anybody to get hurt or anything else, i think this is the right place to contribute ideas isn't it, this ad is not published, its just a student kind of work, which i'll be using for my potfolio. if anyone has serious issues with it i will delete it, and this is just a famous charactor which is known for its strength. so thought to use it.

Wasn't being negative at all - your original brief wasn't clear on what this was being used for. I'm sorry you took offense to my question - wasn't meant to be an attack, just a point. Since you've now clarified it's for personal use only, then there's no need to be offended.

It's a good design, except the text is WAY too small for a billboard. If it looks small on my screen, it's definitely going to look small in real life.

Make it larger and you're there. (This is NOT the same as 'Make the Logo Bigger' which we all hate as designers! he he.)

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thanks guys, thanks a lot. i would also like to know ur views on the concept and idea.

using someone else's property in an ad for something else is called borrowed interest and it's typically frowned upon. you'd be better off sticking the a billboard worker to it. i know you want to keep that because superman is strong, but he's a trademark.

sorry my freind! on this point i would like to disagreee with u, coz here i would like to say that superman is nobodies personal property as it has been created and modified itself from several makers of comics, films etc.. but as i have mentioned above its just for my portfolio purpose. thanks for the comments. but i just wan't some opinions on the idea too. pleaaaaaaaaaaasssseee.

ok i got something new to learn. the second thing, iam tired of asking for some opinions on my idea and concept, i think i better give up on this point. anyways thanks for the support.

thanks a lot for the appreciation.