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wynnc's picture
165 pencils

A few more looks..

A few progressions of my previous personal mark, let me know what you think.

Thanks,

-cw

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mara06's picture
2548 pencils

Better! No to the top one, though; looks too much like Chutes & Ladders or one of those plastic kiddie racetrack toys. I like the second and third, but the "w" doesn't really read as a "w" in the second one, so I prefer the third. Really an elegant mark. The fact that it incorporates your initials is just icing on top. :)

Mara

Hof's picture
129 pencils

he last one.

qwertyale's picture
1833 pencils

it's like frog eggs

yes I'm brazilian xD

Jon Askill's picture
362 pencils

The 2nd one for me! I like where you're going and where you've come from too. All posts have reminded me of the co-op logo (UK only?) but that's ok and a negligible observation tbh.

Forgive me but, could you just remind me of your name please. :)

I think you could call it a day though and use no#2 imho.

>> Cookie cut the chaos >>

YoungZM's picture
657 pencils

The bottom is much better, what would it look like without the white space before the stroke and stroke around it?

caoimghgin's picture
842 pencils

Your original post really shows an improvement.

Without my sense of direction, I don't know where I'd be.

Art D. Rector's picture
2771 pencils

Better, but the letters are too well defined for me. The bottom is the best imo, but I don't like the letters overlapping.

mara06's picture
2548 pencils

The more I think about it, the more I like the one you originally showed us over any of these -- even with the anchor & rope idea.

Mara

qwertyale's picture
1833 pencils

use the first try rounded shape, not this C

and make as this #1

but with rounded edges as your first try.

yes I'm brazilian xD

Gregorr's picture
133 pencils

I love the bottom one! The shapes it makes are beautiful, the 'w' looks far better. For me it has a more modern/current feel to it than the others. I like very much.

No amount of technology can save a bad idea.

Donateko's picture
126 pencils

I like the bottom one the best. In my opinion, it has the most unity of the three, plus it seems better balanced. Good Job.

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