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g23williams's picture
18 pencils

final piece

finished piece. i know the GW font looks creepy, but thats what im going for.

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hondrcr7's picture
26 pencils

holy balls. this freaks me out.
awesome!

qwertyale's picture
1834 pencils

Mom, I won't sleep tonight (Episode two)

yes I'm brazilian xD

pmathews's picture
77 pencils

Not sure of the connection between your type choices. The scale of the GW is huge compared to your name and what you do. I wish you had taken early advice and went in a new direction.

pimiento's picture
44 pencils

Hello g23williams,
the last time you posted this logo you said that you knew it was simple but that's what you're going for. This time you're saying that you know it's creepy but that's what you're going for.
So I need you to clarify what it is you want this logo to say about you.
(Don't say 'simple and creepy'!)

I think that using 3 different fonts in a design like this is too many.
If you really want it to appear simple then keep it simple.
If you really want it to be scary then I'm sure you can be scarier than this can't you?

This, as always, is just an opinion but I hope it helps a bit.

Art D. Rector's picture
2770 pencils

If you want to be known as the skateboard dude who can do cool stick figures - congrats. You own that market now.

aroberts's picture
262 pencils

There's 3 disconnected fonts going on here, why is that? As said before, the mark is FAR too big in relation to your name and "graffix".

Honestly the worst thing about this is that the GW is terribly executed. It looks disjointed and totally makes known of the fact that you haven't had enough practice with the pen tool.

taba's picture
163 pencils

+100

Blown up at that size, all of the flaws of that typeface you chose are amplified. If you insist on using this typeface, you need to take it into Illustrator, Create Outlines, and tame some of those awkward bumps and lumps.

taba's picture
163 pencils

Oh yeah, and the kerning on "Graffix" is atrocious.

And why would you capitalize "Graffix" when "Grant" and "Williams" is not?

Leaky Penny's picture
2612 pencils

Leaky Penny
Check out what I've been up to lately!
http://petersonjoseph.com

I'm going to print it out and eat it.

-Unknown Artist

aroberts's picture
262 pencils

BEST. REPLY. EVA.

aroberts's picture
262 pencils

I'm not meaning this to offend the person who posted- this is just really funny in general!

volitionart's picture
38 pencils

ROFLMFAO

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