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eZoeGraffix's picture
103 pencils

First timer

The client wants the whole text on one line, flat, two colors.

I guess I'm curious if I'm going in the right direction, and if so, with which one.

Be gentle. :)

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DawningConcept's picture
60 pencils

Do you have to have the .com? The house seems very squished in the second one. Neither of these are doing anything for me.

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eZoeGraffix's picture
103 pencils

It HAS to have the whole text, although the .com can be on a second line.

NOW, however, the client is saying no letters B, R, or E and no house. I'm finding it challenging to find something that says "Boise Real Estate"...lol

Art D. Rector's picture
2771 pencils

These dotcom names are murder - I feel for you. But the idea behind the second one is interesting - breaking out the business type from the city name by reversing "real estate" defuses the length and makes it easier to remember imo. I'd explore further along those lines.

qwertyale's picture
1833 pencils

cheap type setup

yes I'm brazilian xD

3dogmama's picture
1991 pencils

If the client is not wanting an acronym or house, why not try delving into what Boise, Idaho represents? ie it was settled by French traders; boise means wooded; it's known for its river greenbelt area, etc....

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