Flash your expressions
captonjohn (347 points) | Thu, 2008-09-25 15:57Flash your expressions.
This ad is based on idea that after chewing happydent someone's teeth's are shining from its photograph also.
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The concept is not really that clear. Maybe show more of the girl's face and just have the flash on her mouth?
thanks for commenting pokie, may I know what thing can be more better according to your opinion. Please let me know how can I make it more effective.
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I agree that the concept is a bit confusing. It doesnt help that the product and ITTY BITTY COPY are tucked on the bottom right of the ad. Why do you do that? Right now, it seems like you have a really bad photo with bad lighting. You need to focus on the girl and her face considering "expression" is the theme of your ad. Make the one single line of copy bigger so its easily readable. Your product has to stand out more. Perhaps the product can be integrated somehow into the photo rather than hiding it where its at?
Thanks for these valuable suggestion designmonkey. The reason that I've hide whole photo just because this photo had very poor quality & my motive was to focus on that lady which was smiling more.
I'm not good in copy so what I thought I used as copy but I'm trying to improving it.
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if your photo is poor quality, then you need to look for a better quality photo.
I'm searching an replacement of this photo with a new & good quality photo. By the way thanks for suggestion.
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I like it! i think the concept is clear, but, makes me think that the product is very old, maybe a newer picture can help.
Long live the wasteful ... dead money!. Sabina