flyer for play

The art is cool! Unfortunately the fonts are boring boring boring. Try some rougher edged fonts that better blend with the gray of your flyer. Remember, 'young' these days usually means 'paint splatter'. :)

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Very nice overall! My only problem is the yellow/green font on top text, it seems to lack the youthful "edge" the rest of the flyer has. If you do want to make it stand-out more and have Christmas feel...maybe you could use a green overlay or simply swap your grey for green. I don't really care for the edging treatment...maybe have a solid ripped edge, but not the yellow gradient look. Just thoughts.
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Nice feel overall, definitely youthful and positive.

The typeface for the actual event information is fine, clean and clear. The type for "A Christmas Like No Other" should have a lot more character; maybe a graffiti style, or a more rugged style to match the style of the hooded sweatshirt.

The solid black outline is taking away from the feel of the piece, it does need some sort of border, but not so straight and solid.

I agree with alamode909's advice on the torn edge too.

Its coming along, I look forward to seeing some updates. Cheers!

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i don't see any thing related to christmas the design is good but it doesn't go with the festival theme. i think, it would look more better if u would have used snow flakes or other material related to the festive..
i think i told pretty right coz iam an indian. as christmas is celebrated with the same joy at my place.
btw merry christmas to everyone.

I immediately thought I was looking at a fashion ad. The detail is all in the clothing. The top title should have a cooler font and NOT be slanted.