Flyer MP3 seller
Maurizio (58 pencils) | Mon, 2007-10-08 09:46Hi to all,
here my design for a flyer(front and back) about an italian society that sell services about mp3 music.my idea is to see the music like gasoline...CC appreciate ,thanks :)
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The gas station fill-up idea is fun. I don't see it carried through pn both sides of your layout, though. And the background is, I think, too busy. It detracts from the concept. I think the cleverness of the concept would hit harder if you made the layout much simpler, not unlike the simplicity of Apple's iPod ads themselves.
Would love to see a second draft of this!
Mara
Are you advertising the ipod or the mp3s? Focus your idea, de-clutter the background (that style is gone), and make it simple. You idea is not clear, there are too many distractions.
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Although it's a little busy, in the bg anyways, but I LOVE the girl! Is she an illustration? Photoshopped?
edit: WOW. Your website is phenominal....
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I'm going to print it out and eat it.
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Good art! However, the text needs some serious kerning work...
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The text looks totally out of place. I like the design but I would change the text and the color they seem to just be placed in there
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