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octavian's picture
13 pencils

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The idea was to make a poster with cleopatra so i started to look for good image of cleopatra but i din not find a good one, so i started in photoshop to draw something( must tell you i don`t have any art school, so my drawing skills are not good) and i realize that i should go with another image something more abstract but i didn`t want to left the drawing not finished so this is with what i came up. What do you think.

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tlarson2k's picture
66 pencils

What's the message of the poster?
Is this for a client?
Who is the target?

I can't really crit this without the above info, unless you want something from a basic illustrative point of view.

stephanie's picture
518 pencils

It actually sounds like yet -another- school project.

I actually really like the image - but I agree it's hard to critique something without more details.

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ollstar's picture
109 pencils

although it looks like a school project, i think it's quite nice made...

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HowardRoark's picture
20 pencils

It does look good. I especially like the texture of the image. Very egyptian. I think more texture on the hair and the necklace (?) is needed though to match the texture of the whole image.

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Ivan's picture

As an illustration it's not bad, but not very grabbing either. As communication it doesn't tell anything.

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