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Bdog's picture
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Frontside Business card

Would like some views on my business card

The logo at the bottom right hand corner is an 'n' with a neck/giraffe

But... i've only just noticed it seems to look like an 'h'

Any feedback is welcome,

Thanks

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mrcoupon's picture
349 pencils

If presenting a professional appearance is important for you, a link to your somewhat profane Twitter account filled with obsessive Dana White shoutouts may not be in your best interest.

That logo undoubtedly looks like an H. There's no easy fix to that without restarting the concept.

The rest is fine although I personally find the font for 'Graphic Design' mildly annoying.

gwells's picture
1711 pencils

generally i like it. "graphic design" is a bit awkwardly and inconsistently kerned in places (in particular, the "hic" and "sig").

mara06's picture
2548 pencils

I think this is very nice, actually, with the fixes gwells has already pointed out. If mrcoupon is correct about the contents of your Twitter account, that def needs cleaning up.

The giraffe isn't working. I'd like to see just the long neck of a giraffe, and its head, rising from the bottom edge and appearing to be aiming at the slanted text as if it was something to eat.

What do you mean by "neck art"? Do you do neck tats or something? If so, artify the giraffe's neck.

Excuse me. I have to go drink heavily now....

Mara

Bdog's picture
36 pencils

Thanks mara, Neckart is just neckart a name, but as for the work, all forms of graphic and design

yeah its back to the drawing board with the giraffe

Bdog's picture
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will also remove twitter account haha

Art D. Rector's picture
2771 pencils

Both the kerning and the leading need work.

YoungZM's picture
657 pencils

I'll agree first with MrC, I'm not even wanting to put an effort in critiquing the rest of your card now that I checked out your twitter account. It looks like it's been moderated by an angry 14 year old kid. Obscene, immature, nothing related to design. It shows nothing positive about you or your work from the slight glance I've just taken.

qwertyale's picture
1833 pencils

ok it's your personal taste but I think the font choices are too much cheap

the spacings are annoying, the text line alignment to icon is all wrong

"Design" seems to be compressed

you can explore the giraffe adding a necktie xD it's cute and nonsense

yes I'm brazilian xD

Jon Askill's picture
362 pencils

Generally, I like it.

I don't like the giraffe at all.

I like the 'neck art' font and echo Mr C's opinion on the mildy annoying 'graphic design' font.

A lot of kerning work needs to be done too.

I couldn't personally give a crap about your Twitter account with regards to whether or not I give my opinions here - obscene, immature or not, but do agree with MrC about your potential customers and their view on it.

>> Cookie cut the chaos >>

edwardjameson's picture
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One of the most powerful, yet ignored weapons in your marketing weapon store is your business card. There are many ways that a person can attract customers to one's business. Some do this by launching a marketing campaign in the form of an ad in the paper or on a billboard. Some don't use marketing at all and just flourish through word of mouth. On a more personal level if that person travels around, the best thing to carry and give out are Silk Business Cards

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