Full Stage Autobody Logo
Tsuki Ames (7 points) | Tue, 2009-10-20 19:46Created for a local Auto Shop. Would love a critique! They do full service Auto Body and Repairs.
~Tsuki Ames
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Too detailed for a logo. Simplify the car, break it down to b/w and enlarge it. Lose the spotlights. The "Full Stage" and "Auto Body" are competing too - resolve that. Maybe it will fly - but I'd be working on other ideas too.
Why doesn't anyone understand the difference between an illustration and a logo?
Get a different car on there. It looks like a 1995 clipart. Or maybe you don't need a car at all. A lot of things say "car" other than just a picture of a car.
Shorten the strokes above and below the text so that they align with the text.
Put emphasis on auto body.
And yeah, nix the spotlights.
If it doesn't sell, it isn't creative.
I really like this. It makes an excellent book cover I find. I really like the illustration and...huh...what? It's *not* a book cover? It's a logo?!
*facepalm*
Leaky Penny
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I'm going to print it out and eat it.
-Unknown Artist
I liked! but the car need less details and use black do not grey, It will be good logo.
yes I'm brazilian xD
*UPDATE*
Made the 'not so constructive' changes and adjusted the logo a bit and the client selected my original logo! :)
I understand that in a perfect world of design a logo should be minimalistic, however not every client wants that and I think as a Designer we have to facilitate options and educate our clients as the choices are presented to them.
taba and Leaky Penny - did not appreciate your sarcastic, non-constructive critics, oh wait, those were not critics were they? Thanks anyways for trying.
~Tsuki Ames