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gathering

monther (33 pencils) | Mon, 2007-12-17 11:28

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vanshea | Mon, 2007-12-17 16:25

I would almost like to see the ornaments COMPLETELY done with type..almost.

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mara06 | Mon, 2007-12-17 16:50

It isn't a novel idea. Newspapers frequently do this sort of thing. If it's new in your part of the world, though, it might work nicely.

Your spelling and punctuation are incorrect, though. The tag should read:

gathering right here wishing you
a happy holiday season

"Gathering right here" is an odd phrase. What are you actually trying to say?

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alamode909 | Mon, 2007-12-17 17:52

I completely agree with Mara on this one. This has been done a lot, especially with brand names such as these. One thing you could think about doing is using shapes and color in a pattern with the brands on them to convey your holiday concept. Maybe a pattern of gift boxes with bows and on each is a name brand...something like that? Love the background. I am a huge fan of lowercase text, but in this case it feels weird...almost too informal for a product that has such high-end brands.

Just thoughts.

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pokie | Thu, 2007-12-20 05:18

maybe a more whimsical font for the tag line.

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natobasso | Thu, 2007-12-20 16:52

How about just one ornament, done completely in text? This looks half done to me.

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