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pixeler's picture
73 pencils

Graduation Ceremony Poster 2

I just tried to improve last one I published before..
whats your idea?

Thanks a lot.

Pixeler

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wgzn's picture
1711 pencils

YEEK! this isnt an improvement. unless its a clown college

qwertyale's picture
1833 pencils

C is better
D seems a clown

yes I'm brazilian xD

pixeler's picture
73 pencils

Yes, I agree with you ;) for D I just tried to work with color but I couldn't reach meaning :)

Pixeler

pixeler's picture
73 pencils

yes,I agree with you ;)
for D I just tried to work with color but I couldn't reach meaning :)

Pixeler

Leaky Penny's picture
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I don't understand what you're trying to go for. It seems some of the letters are moving at high speeds, but I don't understand the concept.

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pixeler's picture
73 pencils

Thanks for all your attentions. The concept is that some '1' and '0' (because of computer science field) are moving quickly together to create graduation cap.

Pixeler

Leaky Penny's picture
2616 pencils

"The concept is that some '1' and '0' (because of computer science field) are moving quickly together to create graduation cap."

Unless you told me that, I wouldn't be able to tell. Not good.

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pixeler's picture
73 pencils

concept or design?

Pixeler

Leaky Penny's picture
2616 pencils

Both.

Leaky Penny
Check out what I've been up to lately!
http://petersonjoseph.com

I'm going to print it out and eat it.

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Art D. Rector's picture
2771 pencils

Reboot. Dump all this and start from scratch.

wgzn's picture
1711 pencils

i think people should be fined if they use the whole 1 and 0 thing. that is sooooo played out...

pixeler's picture
73 pencils

I don't know but it should be said that poster 'C' was accepted by so many people and they like it so much; such as graphic designer and computer science students ;) anyway thanks for your attention. maybe I redesign it :)

Pixeler

captonjohn's picture
347 pencils

It's fine that if it got selected but from the idea and execution point of view you should try a totally different concept. However you can also make it more better if you remove all the arabic text inside the human silhouette and just keep it blank and add any neutral color to that with a light outline. You needn't add green color in human illustration. Just keep an green or grey outline of human silhouette with color neutral color and add a message inside this.

I would prefer to put all this concept aside and work on totally new concept.

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