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vinnylo (119 pencils) | Thu, 2009-05-14 16:44

here is a redux of my last critique. I hope you enjoy or have something interesting to say... :)

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TylerR_NKY | Thu, 2009-05-14 17:08

Way better! I really like the form, but ditch the reflection effects. The green and black should be solid. Besides that I thinks it's real tight. Good work.

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GregSauce | Thu, 2009-05-14 17:14

depending on the application, I kind of like the reflection effect.

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Anonymous (not verified) | Thu, 2009-05-14 18:03

The reflection is just used for a computer screen to make it pop. Its not really part of the design. But glad you like!

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mara06 | Thu, 2009-05-14 18:37

Excellent redsign! I would lose the leaf, though. It's a cliché and you don't need it to get the ecology theme across. I agree about losing the effects, too, though they wold look good online.

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vinnylo | Thu, 2009-05-14 18:53

thanks! I' so gad you guys are diggin' the new redesign!

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Anonymous (not verified) | Thu, 2009-05-14 21:47

What's so good about it?

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TylerR_NKY | Thu, 2009-05-14 21:56

Seriously why are people allowed to post without logging in? It just attracts trolls.

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Leaky Penny | Fri, 2009-05-15 01:40

...when most of these idiots don't have the balls to show their real names or even their own work. Ivan, can we drop the "Anonymous" profiles?

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