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Brundlefly's picture
53 pencils

Gripp Card Design.

Client wanted something a little hipper for handing out at a trade-show.

2 pantone over 1, with spot matté varnish, paper stora-enza 16 pt, very heavy, smudge and fingerprint resistant.

"The definition of a liberal is someone who's afraid to take their own side in a fight."

Gripp Card Design.

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Brundlefly's picture
53 pencils

and I posted twice, excuse my lack of control.

"The definition of a liberal is someone who's afraid to take their own side in a fight."

garyW's picture
143 pencils

I love the way the logo dots the "i'.

My only suggestion would be to delete the comma after 'Arkansas'. Also, it looks like you need to be consistent with the character spaces after the colons between the numbers and email address. I think the spacing after 'Mobile:' looks better.

Brundlefly's picture
53 pencils

I will get to fixing the copy once they approve the design, the red is actually quite a bit more "brick" red... just the pantones from illustrator to photoshop shifting./

"The definition of a liberal is someone who's afraid to take their own side in a fight."

garyW's picture
143 pencils

with the photoshop rendering of the multiple cards. I rarely present this kind of work to a client face to face with printed comps. It seems everything is emailed as PDF flat 2D visuals. The 3D really makes a difference, specially for a object like a business card. Thank you, I think I may try that sometime.

Brundlefly's picture
53 pencils

you can see on my flickrpage http://www.flickr.com/photos/peapod_studios/

on edit there isn't much there... oops.

"The definition of a liberal is someone who's afraid to take their own side in a fight."

natobasso's picture
3954 pencils

I love the design. One critique: It looks like the card content on the white side is 'avoiding' the middle of the card. I'd suggest making the logo bigger so your eye isn't drawn to the empty center, it will land on the logo instead.

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"The price one pays for pursuing any profession or calling
is an intimate knowledge of its ugly side." - James Baldwin

Brundlefly's picture
53 pencils

I would increase the logo size. but I cant in good faith overbloat microgramma.

"The definition of a liberal is someone who's afraid to take their own side in a fight."

natobasso's picture
3954 pencils

A good logo is resizable to any size!

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"The price one pays for pursuing any profession or calling
is an intimate knowledge of its ugly side." - James Baldwin

natobasso's picture
3954 pencils

Huh?

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"The price one pays for pursuing any profession or calling
is an intimate knowledge of its ugly side." - James Baldwin

zer0tech's picture
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i like both designs, specially the red ones.

Brundlefly's picture
53 pencils

that is the front and back so you get it all in one.

"The definition of a liberal is someone who's afraid to take their own side in a fight."

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