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health food shop website

I am new to creative bits - I'm a humble student still and this is a website that I'm doing for a health food/biological products shop. I'm still learning and I thought it would be really useful to get people's opinion on some of the stuff im doing....I would really appreciate your comments.

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I think the colors in general are good.

The overall layout is a bit boring. There is nothing exciting to look at. You need to work on a better looking header. The subjects has so many interesting visuals. Food comes in so many different shapes and colors.

The logo needs to be relooked. That font is hideous.

The bodytext is hard to read as it is now. Make it regular instead of bold.

Your signature is over the top. Make it smaller and simpler.

Good luck!

tiska's picture
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I agree about the logo but unfotunately they gave me the existing logo to work with and i wasn't able to change the ugly font!!! i will try some more ideas for the header tho and i will post the next version. Much appreciate the feedback.

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