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Healthcare PR

Idea for a redesign of a Healthcare PR Company's Branding. comments welcome

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Anders's picture
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What's the concept?

I don't see much health care.

Leaky Penny's picture
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Video game company.

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www.jackmancer.com's picture
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Lol, yes I was thinking this. "Not bad for a video game company".

qwertyale's picture
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rave

yes I'm brazilian xD

caoimghgin's picture
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The image is quite good but the execution of the cube could be taken to a higher (shinier) level. However, the mark does not communicate Healthcare.

Good eye, bad communication.

Without my sense of direction, I don't know where I'd be.

qwertyale's picture
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energy drink

yes I'm brazilian xD

monkey1979's picture
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ice cube packaging

living on dreams and custard creams.

Leaky Penny's picture
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Energon manufacturer.

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gnasm's picture
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Leaky for the win!

Art D. Rector's picture
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Biosphere testing facility.

monkey1979's picture
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pimp my box.

living on dreams and custard creams.

Leaky Penny's picture
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That's what she said.

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matt11235813's picture
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+1 ³

Anders's picture
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Gypsy imprisonment.

NRcreative's picture
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software company

Art D. Rector's picture
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Pool equipment supplier.

Leaky Penny's picture
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Logo for Minecraft.

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wgzn's picture
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why the curved line?

samtgarner's picture
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Wow, don't hold back. I didn't expect so many comments over the weekend, but I see where most of you are coming from.

I want to incorporate a healthcare feel without going down the road of test tubes, tablets or stethoscopes, if you know what i mean. Corny Icons just wasn't what i was aiming for. The cube within a cube within a cube was supposed to portray protection and transparency

It looks like its back to the drawing board for this one. Thanks to everyone for your comments.

Leaky Penny's picture
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Before going onto your computer or even before you begin drawing, start with some word association. Get a solid concept. Execution is the last part. Keep it up.

Remember, every element of your logo must have a reason to be.

Leaky Penny
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samtgarner's picture
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Cheers. I'll go think things through a bit.

wgzn's picture
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and get off the gradient train. get your mark working in BLACK first.
if your mark doesnt work in all black - it doesnt work.

samtgarner's picture
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already considered 1, 2 and 4 colour print. but being that nobody seems to have anything good to say about the logo it may as well head to the big trash can in the sky

wgzn's picture
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works nicely in black and white.
but looks a bit too much like this:
http://www.qubo.com/

Art D. Rector's picture
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I'll say something good about it - it's a nice piece of art (both in color and black and white). However - it doesn't say "healthcare" or "pr" or "branding" in any way at all. It says...

Post modern furniture manufacturer.

Ergo - it's inappropriate. Put it on a back burner and maybe one day you'll find some use for it.

qwertyale's picture
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I think all line strokes are wrong, type ones included.

yes I'm brazilian xD

samtgarner's picture
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wrong how? Please elaborate on your comment, that would be a great help.

qwertyale's picture
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it needs visual correction... the sides vertical lines are thin than main one. even there are two view sides, the side ones need more stroke.

yes I'm brazilian xD

samtgarner's picture
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Thanks. If I move it forward I will take a look a that.

wgzn's picture
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"the side ones need more stroke."

i would disagree with that

qwertyale's picture
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as default

yes I'm brazilian xD

samtgarner's picture
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I did try making the strokes the same, but it visually lost its balance. Maybe i tweak them a bit if I re-look at it.

Thanks for the comments everybody.

qwertyale's picture
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even the type line could be wider

yes I'm brazilian xD

Ivan's picture

It doesn't look like healthcare or PR. Gaming is right or even architecture.

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