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hels's picture
34 pencils

helen scott logo 2

Have attempted to work on my logo again.
I am the hardest client I have had!
comments please.

previous version:
http://www.creativebits.org/my_logo_i_would_love_some_advice

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Leaky Penny's picture
2616 pencils

Man, do I ever love the top one. I don't know why, I just do.

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wgzn's picture
1711 pencils

the orange/black HS icon has SOME promise. the rest is horrific!

qwertyale's picture
1835 pencils

don't know your target but I think too much mainstream.

with a beautiful name like yours I would probably made it B&W and more kerning

i think this "DESIGN" is so overused.

you could explore crossword with design and your name but with some creativity inside (obvious)

yes I'm brazilian xD

Art D. Rector's picture
2772 pencils

The top one is interesting. But the last strip of color is unnecessary - the N should reverse out like the D. Also don't think you need the bar underneath or the "print and web solutions" text.

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