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Hey guys, don't hate me for this one

Manny Cruz (47 pencils) | Tue, 2006-07-04 22:50

Just putting my creative mind (I think I have one) at work on a real issue

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spencereholtaway | Tue, 2006-07-04 23:45

Same as my comment on the other one. What do you do instead of graphic design or advrtising? Thinking of a change of career?!

Spencer E Holtaway
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Spencer E Holtaway
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Apfhex | Wed, 2006-07-05 00:30

I get what the text at the bottom is saying, but the line "Being a father." as a statement by itself is very awkward, it seems to me it should say "Be a father."

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Alexander | Wed, 2006-07-05 01:39

I've been pretty idle on the critique section lately, but these fictive ads you've been coming with really stirred something within me. Take it as a compliment!

I like the way you present your messages. Straight forward, no bullsh**, right to the bone (literally). You say what should be said and you say it well with a great concept that makes people think. This is what advertising should be all about. Brilliant!

Although you're not the world's greatest designer, you seem to be having great ideas with a plan on how to execute them. You would be an asset in the business.

In short; you are creative! Keep it going!

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Ivan | Wed, 2006-07-05 15:26

idea is there. you need to try and simplify. more white space! look at the economist ads. lose the explanations.

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