Hey guys, don't hate me for this one
Manny Cruz (47 points) | Tue, 2006-07-04 22:50
Just putting my creative mind (I think I have one) at work on a real issue
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Same as my comment on the other one. What do you do instead of graphic design or advrtising? Thinking of a change of career?!
Spencer E Holtaway
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Spencer E Holtaway
Graphic Designer
I get what the text at the bottom is saying, but the line "Being a father." as a statement by itself is very awkward, it seems to me it should say "Be a father."
I've been pretty idle on the critique section lately, but these fictive ads you've been coming with really stirred something within me. Take it as a compliment!
I like the way you present your messages. Straight forward, no bullsh**, right to the bone (literally). You say what should be said and you say it well with a great concept that makes people think. This is what advertising should be all about. Brilliant!
Although you're not the world's greatest designer, you seem to be having great ideas with a plan on how to execute them. You would be an asset in the business.
In short; you are creative! Keep it going!
idea is there. you need to try and simplify. more white space! look at the economist ads. lose the explanations.