Hi to all,
this is a page i did for this italian company that rent PC machines for VideoGames and Intenet to place in Hotels,bar etc etc ,CC welcome as usual,thanks!
Mau
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Good! Looks visually interesting yet simple.
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this is a clutter, seriously..
what's with all the lines in the background? you really do like to try and make it look like a circuit board. the bevel buttons and images look too cartoonish and childish. You might be able to find some ALOT more effective with some stock photography. The black swirl behind the buttons on the left confuses me.
personally, this looks dated.
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Thanks Lady !
Archmedia cartoonish is my style and the clients want this from my studio,if not you bet that they look to designer less dated...LOL
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Maurizio it seems as if you are taking offense to Archmedias comments (which I tend to agree with spot on)
If indeed your style is cartoonish and that was what your client was looking for then why did you not include that in your brief?
Also, it seems a bit of an oxymoron that you want to represent a company that offers VideoGaming on PCs (seems pretty modern/ technologically sound) with a look that is "dated" which as you said is what your client was looking for.
I think you were offended by ArchMedia's comment and it hurt your ego. Remember we are here to help you, so dont take any comment personal. We are just stating the obvious.
Cartoonish or not, but the site looks too messy. I would simplify it and remove most of the elements. I agree with archmedia, that the webpage looks dated, using swirls and lines.. thats quite old. we are forbidden to use swirls in my arts academy btw :P
i checked your portfolio.. i love your illustrations, they are very unique. keep up the good work
Do your clients want this site to be google searchable? It won't be in flash unless you use good XML...
I'd suggest brighter colors as the ones you have now are dark and dreary. Brown to green gradients do not a fun cartoony site make.
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I hope in a good XML...some parts in flash and others in html with dreamweaver...soon on line,just working on the flash clip moovie.
anyway thanks all of you for your critics,those will help me for the next webdisegn for sure.
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thanks yoda..
"Brown to green gradients do not a fun cartoony site make."
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Architectural Technician - Multimedia Designer
www.ArchMedia.us