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robbie's picture
356 pencils

hulk wall poster,

just playing with image depth perception,

weird!!

let me know what you think!

16 billion colours and you choose the one i cant create !??!

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Leaky Penny's picture
2612 pencils

The Hulk would have to be sharper, and the things in back of him a little blurred. Right now it's a little messy. Too much going on in the back the eye travels all over the place.

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I'm going to print it out and eat it.

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robbie's picture
356 pencils

thanks for your thoughts leaky

16 billion colours and you choose the one i cant create !??!

Leaky Penny's picture
2612 pencils

Here's a good example

http://i.imgur.com/UfB6c.jpg

Leaky Penny
Check out what I've been up to lately!
http://petersonjoseph.com

I'm going to print it out and eat it.

-Unknown Artist

robbie's picture
356 pencils

i get ya, going to be tough bringing the hulk to the front without obscuring the other details on the poster. I dont want to blur them too much cause they are visually quite important and help tell a story.
I originally had a green tint to the whole thing and had to ditch it due to it pulling the hulk back into the other 5 subjects,

I liked the idea of having general ross looking over the whole thing, i tried to do this in a subtle way that you could only see when looking at the image from a distance, maybe this makes it too chaotic?

thanks for the example

16 billion colours and you choose the one i cant create !??!

Leaky Penny's picture
2612 pencils

The problem is you have overlapping elements (top left) This piece is a great example of why a good composition is the foundation of any piece of artwork. The DNA strand, Bruce Banner and Betty are all competing in the background. Since it's going to be blurred, it is even more important that there be a certain harmony. Notice the picture of the dog, although everything is blurred, you can still tell what is what, and nothing is overlapping or competing in the back.

Like with everything in design, a sketchpad will help you resolve these issues.

Leaky Penny
Check out what I've been up to lately!
http://petersonjoseph.com

I'm going to print it out and eat it.

-Unknown Artist

robbie's picture
356 pencils

Thanks again leaky, your advice is always a great help,
cheers

16 billion colours and you choose the one i cant create !??!

aroberts's picture
262 pencils

the logo in the bottom left is trying to escape the page!!!!!

In other news, I completely agree with what LP has said ;)

Art D. Rector's picture
2770 pencils

Which Hulk is that? Doesn't look like any of the ones I remember.

qwertyale's picture
1834 pencils

I see enemies power, not Hulk power.

He is defensive.

yes I'm brazilian xD

robbie's picture
356 pencils

The hulk is a photo i took of an action figure, I wanted to have a real looking aspect to the piece without using the movie version,
I was thinking that the subjects in the background were in the hulks head, glimpses at his past, chaotic, but it has just come across cramped!!

thanks for the comments

16 billion colours and you choose the one i cant create !??!

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