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allawy's picture
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I NEED YOUR CRITIQUE ON ON THIS

the logo is for a man whose job is coding. he loves coding and and do coding in his spare time too.
I tried to make a shape of a man with some symbols representing coding..................... and I need your critique.

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Ivan's picture

I think this is good.

Mintsauce's picture
1004 pencils

Agree with Ivan, this is great. A small change, maybe. I'd center the "Developments" in the space between the beginning of the S and the descender of the P.

This might, or might not be an issue, but in comics dead people's eyes are usually done in asterisk.

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caoimghgin's picture
842 pencils

Somehow I think it could be better if the face were made of characters in a mono spaced font. Either way, the message is coming through very clearly as is. Nice.

Without my sense of direction, I don't know where I'd be.

allawy's picture
97 pencils

@Mintsauce
if I centered the word "development" the stick of P and , would become a big mass on the right part of the logo.
that would not be better i think..............or what??!!

allawy's picture
97 pencils

@Mintsauce
if I centered the word "development" the stick of P and , would become a big mass on the right part of the logo.
that would not be better i think..............or what??!!

thanks every body

Mintsauce's picture
1004 pencils

Hey Allaway, if you centred the "development" with the word Snikrep then yes, the , and the p would become a blob. I meant centering it with between the beginning of the S, far left side, and the beginning of the p, the far left side of the P. That way the space to the left of development from the beginning of the word Snikrep will be equal to the space from the left side of the P to the word development. See?

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natobasso's picture
3953 pencils

I'd put "Developments" on the right to ensure it gets secondary notice. Right now it's fighting with "snikrep" for attention.

3dogmama's picture
1991 pencils

Nice work.

And so many directions you could take it with the simple switch-up of a punctuation mark.

cheers.
3dog

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