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Bureauplus's picture
196 pencils

Identity Logo #3

No more EEEEEE's (in the logo..)

Why should this text be at least 10 words?

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Leaky Penny's picture
2616 pencils

There's still that annoying notch on the bottom. I don't recognize the negative shape as a B right off the bat. Did you read my comment in the last critique? Something about hierarchy?

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Bureauplus's picture
196 pencils

No I lost you at Marquise de Sade..:)

But, that was a very good one.. I'll try to make them the same weight.
I don't like wensdays.. Been working since 08:00 in the morning.. Now its 20:00 so 12 hours workday is long enough.. switch of the computer and gotta eat.
Back tomorrow with new and fresh idea's.

monkey1979's picture
684 pencils

Nope. Preferred #2 White background.

living on dreams and custard creams.

Art D. Rector's picture
2772 pencils

Agree - a step backwards here.

3dogmama's picture
1991 pencils

Have you tried the 3D approach:

"Art -- the one achievement of Man which has made the long trip up from all fours seem well advised." - James Thurber

akataka's picture
18 pencils

Sorry, but I have to go pretty critical on this one. I think the negative space is creating too many odd shapes. I see two different D's on top of each other and an "I" standing alone far tot he left. If that trademark stood alone, I would be even more confused on what it stood for. Creating negative space in logos is very hard. It needs to be subtle, not forced, and easily noticeable for the viewer.

This link may help you

http://www.logodesignlove.com/negative-space-logo-design

import60's picture
74 pencils

If you don not mind me being 100% honest, I think you should try a new direction.
It has become to abstract. I totally agree with the remarks from akataka.

The Letter D's picture
66 pencils

+1

A lot of "I Spy" going on. Everyone is seeing something different. It's not a good thing when you're playing the guessing game with a logo.

If it doesn't sell, it isn't creative.

roquette's picture
48 pencils

The colors are cool but the symbol doesn't tell too much.

qwertyale's picture
1835 pencils

the fact that "plus" seems irregular don't atract me.

yes I'm brazilian xD

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