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jaronoff's picture
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identity v 3.

I know i keep showing a variation of this, not trying to spam, just get some feedback. I am using a more contemporary font, but i know it harkens back to art deco.... which i am cool with.... any suggestions? comments? top one is version 3, then 2, then 1 to show a order to the madness.... thanks alot for the critique... something i miss from school days.

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identity v 3.

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pokie's picture
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I like the font in the circle part and the d on the circle part... but not feeling it on the bottom 2 lines (not to mention the r looks more like a p)

jaronoff's picture
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yeah.... i might have to abandon this idea altogether and do something else...

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The new ones are just too complex, because of the type face, and the old ones still have that cooper black.

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jaronoff's picture
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You think it's too complex? Hmmm.. i will go back to the drawing board and see what i can come up with.

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Ivan's picture

Not working for me. Start from scratch!

jaronoff's picture
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Looks like i am going to....

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geoff's picture

This may be obvious to everyone else but I don't get why the D orbits the A

jaronoff's picture
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well, A is the last name, and d stands for design. I don't know. leemee alone! hahaha no, that's why though.
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I think what he's saying is that with the circle, it looks like the D is orbiting the A... kinda like the Earth orbits the sun. ;)

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