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cbirenll (27 pencils) | Thu, 2009-11-05 16:49

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qwertyale | Thu, 2009-11-05 16:57

liked but please no strange reflections anymore in this life again

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Leaky Penny | Thu, 2009-11-05 16:59

Love the font you used for your name, not so much the serifed one. Also, imo, a graphic designer and a commercial designer are the same (if you would even use the term commerical designer) Pick one and lose the ghaslty reflection. Don't you find this one much better?

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monkey1979 | Thu, 2009-11-05 18:10

At first glance it looks quite professional, your name Chelsea flows nicely in that font.

I would clean up the type a bit, the crossover form 'c' to 'h etc.

and as said definitely lose the reflection, it will never work with a scripty / hand-drawn font.

Small text and serifs make for difficult reading.

As leakypenny said, 'commercial' is unnecessary.

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pimiento | Thu, 2009-11-05 20:19

There's a little crossover on the 'r' and 'n' that could be cleaned up a bit too.
Also I find that the little simulated ink flicks on the 'i' and 'r' and a little bit too exaggerated. I find that they draw my eye and create tension in an otherwise simple and effective logo.

+1 lose the reflection - it isn't adding anything to your logo.

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Art D. Rector | Thu, 2009-11-05 20:32

Well I'm glad to see you folks are getting along again. I already commented on this in the other thread - the one with the flame war. :-\

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mara06 | Thu, 2009-11-05 21:45

Chelsea, I agree that your "graphic and commercial designer" doesn't make sense. You are either a "graphic designer" or a "commercial designer," but not all three. Some of use don't even like the term "graphic designer" because it's redundant. And "commercial designer" sounds too much like the mid-20th century term "commercial art," so it sounds a little fusty.

You should not use a reflection.

Are you all in the same class, you people coming here with your names, a line, and a title all similarly presented with reflections? There seems a certain sameness to the "artwork" being posted, and the general tone of the posts.

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