IHN Landing Page Design

congratulations!!! very PRO, exceptional interface... I liked the iPhone app aspect for filling system... it's clever and easy to read... good typography choiceS ... one of the best we'd seen here for last months!

the cloud size and choice are strange... could use a better and wider one

don't understand the blue rectangle position, it's annoying because it stay behind the filling system but not seen too much if you compare each shadow xD

don't like the middle gray curvy effect... I know you need something there xD maybe a direct call number for people want to talk about.

you need a better phrase for "100 other people did"

and a footer that I think you are still planning.

Not as psyched as qwerty.... The middle section with the thermometer and sign-up form are nice, but the rest is problematic imho. The word "homelessness" is the only thing in the header that tells me what the site is about and it's the very last word - small, thin and italic at the end of a paragraph lead-in. "Faith" is actually mentioned TWICE before you get to "homeless". There are minor things like shadows going in every direction, the organization's name is getting lost and no color... but more importantly - how about people? This is supposed to be about people reaching out to help other people - yet there are no people on the page. Put a face on those homeless people so we can connect to them.

Hi abbas20!
Good design but:
- there are too many big words. I think some can stay big and other must be smaller
- there is no footer, why?
- I think that there is missing something to give good/some/big contrast, like a photo (<- Art D.Rector said)
- it looks more like heaven than a hospital

Nice work.