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Akshay Arora (18 pencils) | Sat, 2007-07-14 07:28

THIS WORK IS DONE IN COREL DRAW.

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plugz | Sat, 2007-07-14 12:35

And the railing is a bit too dominant.

Too much stuff fighting for attention for me.

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garyW | Sat, 2007-07-14 16:00

I would think that by the middle of 2007 the world has been saturated by the brand's advertising imagery that this illustrative style just comes off as derivative.

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pokie | Mon, 2007-07-16 02:42

Your edges are too blocky.

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rayaneosman | Mon, 2007-09-10 14:02

the background has nothing to do with the illustration and the black is too rough

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pcusawebmaster | Fri, 2007-10-19 20:58

Whats in the back ground? an ocean?
This photo looks very cool! Nicely done!

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KrunkPony | Mon, 2008-03-17 22:30

Is the top of the lightening bolt black? Or is that just a tangent with another shape? I think it detracts.

Otherwise, great start!

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