Intelligent Automation Systems Homepage
jaronoff (89 pencils) | Wed, 2005-08-03 03:07
I know that this file is huge. I just wanted to get some feedback. I am going for clean, technology based and easy to use and navigate. What do you guys think? I was also thinking about adding a background to it, instead of keeping it white.....
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Joshua Aronoff
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the large chunky font used is sticking out of the design too much. I like the rest of the design but try a less bold font perhaps?
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1. white space neeed between the header and the body text.
2. Security, Audio, Emergency better be left (top) aligned.
3. Some bright color spots would bring it alive. Bright green maybe?
* I think the text below "Get Connect" is a bit to small.
* the title "INTELLIGENT AUTOMATION SYSTEMS" could use some anti-alaising
* I would add an arrow or something to the "Learn more" at the end of the "Get Connect"-text
* I think the gray box makes everything to, ehh.. dull, i guess.. try using only a gray border and leave the body of the box white (don't know if that looks good, but you can try)
* I would remove "Click on the section...." and make it somehow obvious people can click those images.
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I honestly think it looks just fine. I wouldn't change a thing.