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intermission : logo and business card

Tarik (9 pencils) | Thu, 2011-02-10 20:47

I would like to get suggestions on the logo, color, text, layout

This is an internet and marketing company business card.

Thank you.

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xvanegas | Thu, 2011-02-10 22:42

I like the top one better. The company name has good breathing space around it versus the second one seeming to choke it.

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Tarik | Thu, 2011-02-10 23:33

The top one was the first. any critique about the business card layout ?
thx

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qwertyale | Thu, 2011-02-10 23:12

i saw this "m" here

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Tarik | Thu, 2011-02-10 23:29

can't search all the website to find it :)
how about the critique :)

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monkey1979 | Fri, 2011-02-11 09:39

http://www.creativebits.org/oms_logo_retuned

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Leaky Penny | Fri, 2011-02-11 14:59

Well, that was easy.

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Art D. Rector | Fri, 2011-02-11 17:04

THAT'S where I saw it before.

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monkey1979 | Fri, 2011-02-11 17:26

I think I've got a photo/logographic memory.

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Tarik | Fri, 2011-02-11 17:15

interesting, I fond this site 3 or 4 days ago, never seen this logo before.

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monkey1979 | Fri, 2011-02-11 18:30

maybe it was fate.

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Andrew HPS Aust | Fri, 2011-02-11 01:55

The top option looks the goods, although you may want lighten the grey back as per your second layout. And from a production view point the two vertical coloumns look great but keep in mind the printer is going to have to trim them the same width and if they dont you going to have them different thickness and the card will appear off balance.

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Tarik | Fri, 2011-02-11 17:18

thanks, so go for the first one.

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