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iPodbar Business Card - Too static maybe?

This is my business card for the iPodbar, repairs and parts for Apples iPod. Does the card need to be different in the layout. All help would be appreciated.

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anderson.santana13's picture
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It works for me. I think it's cool..
Just an idea: have you ever thought about including an ipod time bar in your logo? you know one of those blue bars that appear on an ipod screen while the music is playing....i don't no if you like the idea or not...maybe it's too basic ....anyway just trying to help!

iambradfordj's picture
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Use Myriad Pro for your font. Apple & all third party associates usually use it for everything. Otherwise, it looks great.

lostzion's picture
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At first glance i thought the idea was to simple, ipod has the wonderful funk and grunge look going with the commercials, this look while getting a bit played out is fabulous, so when i first looked at this i was like way to simple for anything ipod related, however upon fully reading over what the client does, its great this is a wonderful use of visual metaphors to keep people informed without even reading. only suggestion switch the font to the mac standard and you got it.
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