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iraszl logo v2

Thanks for all the feedback on the v1. Please let me know which one you like if any from these. It's a logo for my name Ivan Raszl (IR).

I like top right and bottom right the most.

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Waleed's picture
539 pencils

Can I have 2 votes?
1) Top left
2) Top right

:)

www.jackmancer.com's picture
545 pencils

The I doesn't come forward enough I think. At first glance it's only a R. I think the I needs more attention.


Not saying it's better but here you do see IR as initials.

I can't help to think though, many people with personal websites or personal logo's (with their names in it) use initials. It makes a 100% sense but all you see is initials. The logo's don't tell anything about the person other then their initials.

sanderhartveld's picture
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what i think..
remember, i am not a high class designer, so do not value my comments as if i am god

wgzn's picture
1711 pencils

these are fun. but only one of them really "works" as far as supporting the integrity of the individual letter forms (or not creating other characters, nipples, penises or vacuum tubes in the resulting negative space)

and that would be the top row middle. and im not sure that the style of the type speaks to the style of your work.

i say keep at it. you can do way better

vidya.shankaran's picture
3 pencils

Ivan, here are my 2 cents... though a minimalistic approach.. I took the liberty of casting the logo in white against a black background.. just a thought

www.jackmancer.com's picture
545 pencils

Reminds me of Amnesty international logo ;-)

qwertyale's picture
1835 pencils

this concept is really cool and don't need so tall i

yes I'm brazilian xD

wgzn's picture
1711 pencils

wow. the volume of really bad suggestions here is astounding.
in many of the situations above, the R can easily become a K or a B, or even a sideways AV when reduced.

just out of curiosity is there any reason you guys are mixing cases?
any reason not to go all lowercase? here is an easy solution:

BaronW's picture
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"...wow. the volume of really bad suggestions here is astounding." ...and from the ashes, the Phoenix shall rise. :)


I like it. Alot.

vidya.shankaran's picture
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actually thought of this one too ..but felt suddenly occurred to me that it probably looked like a stick figure of a man relieving himself... sorry no offence meant..

Ivan's picture

I have explored it too. I like it. Undecided...

qwertyale's picture
1835 pencils

this bigger left must be censored xD

yes I'm brazilian xD

www.jackmancer.com's picture
545 pencils

lol indeed

or...

Ivan what was that site about again? xD

mmackinven's picture
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Some cool suggestions, but I found a brick wall, thought some looked familiar. You might want to see this site: http://www.ird.govt.nz/

qwertyale's picture
1835 pencils

this concept is cool too but sometimes seems ivan's head and his fox tall xD

yes I'm brazilian xD

fauxjebus's picture
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What if you make the negative space in the R out of the lower case i?
I don't have any fonts on this computer, so this is a bit clunky but you get the idea.

vidya.shankaran's picture
3 pencils

Absolutely loved the first one!! :)

Ivan's picture

Nice ideas! Thanks!

qwertyale's picture
1835 pencils

really with a good font could be interesting =] an squared thing maybe

yes I'm brazilian xD

wgzn's picture
1711 pencils

that is REALLY nice! i wonder though does it become RI instead of IR?

or does it matter?

now we're getting somewhere... GREAT 1st post faux!

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