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cissabrandao's picture
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Joe's coffee shop

this is a work in progress. Let me know what you think.

Joe's coffee shop

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3dogmama's picture
1994 pencils

Top one. Truly conveys a coffee mug. The only thing I might add would be some steam coming up from the mug.

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gwells's picture
1705 pencils

it's a good concept and a good start, but it's missing something. maybe 3dogmama's right and the steam will do it. but it needs something.

ShawnAllan's picture
131 pencils

The weight of the J should be the same as the 'oes'...
Other than that, I think you might be on to something. I'd like to see how the steam works as well.

mara06's picture
2454 pencils

Make each letter the same weight. I like the steam idea. Might be a cliché, but this logo is unique enough that you could get away with it. I really like your work on this. It's a clever idea.

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Mara

natobasso's picture
3954 pencils

Top one looks like Pe's. Not the kind of reference you want for a coffee shop. :)

A coffee cup is very cliche. Any other ideas hiding on your drawing board?

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cmencos's picture
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I agree, consider a little space between de J and the O, however I like the coffee cup, try to add abstract smoke over the J, like a tall S. Good starting

Carlos Mencos.

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