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Kairos Business Card

nathanlewis (31 pencils) | Sat, 2006-04-01 19:01

A friend started a consultancy -this is my first venture in logo design / business cards your comments would be a help.

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Apfhex | Sun, 2006-04-02 03:23

The logo is familiar, like I've seen it somewhere before. Definitely gives me the feel of something a consultancy might have. You need work on your typography though. The information at the bottom of the card needs to be re-worked. Is it necessary to have all those phone numbers on there? I can see the need to clarify which is which with those icons but it would be nice if you could loose them. I think the design needs some better alignment (I'm not big on everything centered like that).

Are the words "Consultancy Limited" in a typeface that happens to look like that or did you flatten or stretch them? Looks a little odd. And, hmm... I would play around with the arrangement of the logo, maybe try putting the graphic above the text or something, it just doesn't feel very unified as is.

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Ivan | Mon, 2006-04-03 05:24

The logo needs a bit more breathing space on the top. Director can be smaller, because it's less important than the name. The miniature icons for phone, etc are cool, but make them smaller, so you can bring the 3 lines closer together. I don't understand the meaning of the logo.

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geoff | Mon, 2006-04-03 18:04

I'd move the top and bottoms elements more towards the center so you have some nice margins and breathing room.

The type for the name and title seem a little weak to me.
Very neat logo but I'd imagine it doesn't scale to small sizes very well.

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