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Kamasutra

Kamasutra

For safe sex. Kamasutra.

Mitch's picture
134 pencils

Like Jammo said on the other thread, I agree that this has no basic concept to it.

Why carrotts? How do they promote safe sex?

The only connection I can see with sex and vegatables is an obvious one (well to me anyway), but it's not represented here. Maybe you could use the cliches of the old female friend that doesn't need batteries? But then again this is just a thought, not a solid idea.

Sorry to sound negative, but this is pretty similar to your water ad, I just feel it has no substance, and definately has a confused message.

p.s. I like the telephone one, some of the suggestions there are very good, I would work a serif font into the headline, don't go heavy and bold, use the white space to draw the attention to a well kerned headline, not the weight of the font.

Mitch's picture
134 pencils

Oh yeah your font choice for kamasutra is poor, and it has a typo...

wurx's picture
59 pencils

Concept is not really good. Photoshopped carrots are blurry and look, well, "photoshopped"

Spelling is wrong.

Please put a bit more effort into your work prior to posting.

As you can see the rest of the community is not posting every piece they produce looking for comments. It is clear you just got photoshop, not go practice for about 10 years and post anything that you spent a minimum of 5 hours (not min.) on.

Sorry, but you have posted numerous, and rediculous pieces.

Ivan's picture

If this is targeting gays, I say the concept is cool. Execution needs more work though.

mugget's picture
27 pencils

sorry... but i just can't see how this could possibly be targeting gays? sorry to make you explain it, but... i really don't get it.

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