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Kohinoor Extra Time Condom

An extra time condom at based on the idea of extending time and late night hours in which most sexual intercourse occurs. The message is that it will extend your time so that your four hours from 12am to 4 am late night would extend enough so that 12 hours would seem less than it.

I know my English is not perfect so please discuss about idea instead my language.

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Ivan's picture

I think it's hard to understand the clock. It can be easily misinterpreted.

YoungZM's picture
658 pencils

+1, ads should be easy to figure out with little hidden meaning behind it. There might be some gem buried beneath but it should be easily accessible to the average mind. I'm not sure what's happening here and I wouldn't at all understand that it's a condom ad.

Leaky Penny's picture
2616 pencils

What is this I don't even.

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wgzn's picture
1711 pencils

yeah. sorry. im just not seeing it.

uplow's picture
72 pencils

I don't get it. If you invented the extra time condom, hire a professional superstar graphic designer. Would sell bilions

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qwertyale's picture
1835 pencils

The concept is subtle but the people will only understand that someone changed the clock numbers.

Maybe better if you add 6h and 9h behind 12h and 3h

yes I'm brazilian xD

Anders's picture
413 pencils

Far too complex for the average viewer. Besides, youngsters nowadays have barely seen a clock with arms.

mrcoupon's picture
349 pencils

- Bizarre idea
- Poorly communicated
- Visually boring

Congrats, this one wins the coveted "Trifecta" award.

Winterfell's picture
25 pencils

Normal clock clock is 1-12 (duh).

I think the idea would be better conveyed if you presented a clock that went 1-15. Maybe with a simple tagline of "Twelve Wasn't Enough" at the top.

Side Rant - The condom logo at the bottom sucks. It shouldn't require a red field to be printed. In addition, "Pleasure Condom"? This phrase seems redundant. They're for saving you from 18 years of "get out of my house", not pleasure. Other bits n pieces are already in place to cover that.

Art D. Rector's picture
2772 pencils

A 12 hour condom? Are you supposed to put it on before dinner and take it off the next morning? Somebody help me out here.

YoungZM's picture
658 pencils

I'd like to see Lance Armstrong go for that long, jesus LOL

wgzn's picture
1711 pencils

clearly. a bad (or at least too vague of an) idea. start over.

captonjohn's picture
347 pencils

Thank you all guys for your comments, it sounds the idea need to be re-worked.

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http://www.narendrakeshkar.com

lucious87's picture
48 pencils

It could work, but the joke falls flat and wouldn't be well remembered. I'm sure there's a million more visual metaphors for "extra time"

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