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Mikitjan's picture
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Ladies Suit Manufacturer

Hello there,

I need some advices for one of my student's logo design.
It's for a company specialized in producing working suits for women. The target market is medium to high-class working woman in the cities.

There are some restrictions. It can only use black as a color and must use logogram with five letter only (without any additional explanatory words).

It's quite difficult to make it not looking too 'generic' (too common).

Any comments are appreciated. Thanks.

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caoimghgin's picture
845 pencils

You are the teacher, right? Aren't you supposed to have an opinion of your own students work? I'll give him a B+.

Without my sense of direction, I don't know where I'd be.

qwertyale's picture
1835 pencils

don't like the shape it's still not sexy as needed for this naming.
the shape is too much cheap.

you could try other perspectives, maybe without upper horizontal cut.

yes I'm brazilian xD

qwertyale's picture
1835 pencils

better something curvy near this one extracted from Diavlo font

now you can kick your "v" to trash bin =]

yes I'm brazilian xD

Leaky Penny's picture
2616 pencils

So much more can be done with this. That shape is PERFECT for a womens suits line.
Use some imagination and do research on womens business suits.

Can you see it now?

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I'm going to print it out and eat it.

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caoimghgin's picture
845 pencils

I feel dirty now.

Without my sense of direction, I don't know where I'd be.

3dogmama's picture
1991 pencils

More stylization needed with the collar...perhaps thin lapel wide lapel?
Try losing the v in the word and simply use the graphic, encase the in and the io in breast pockets, etc....?

"Art -- the one achievement of Man which has made the long trip up from all fours seem well advised." - James Thurber

Art D. Rector's picture
2772 pencils

Like the V shape, but would like to see it even more exaggerated.

The word "invio" does nothing for me. Work it.

shawfire's picture
97 pencils

I do like the 'V' shape. Looks like the boobys are being pressed together!! - very feminine!

3dogmama's picture
1991 pencils

Re: shawfire's booby comments...you'd best take care where you end up placing the "." of the "i"s....or not!

"Art -- the one achievement of Man which has made the long trip up from all fours seem well advised." - James Thurber

shawfire's picture
97 pencils

I see a classic logo in the making!!!! x rated be it!

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