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samz3d's picture
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Laptopmovie

Website home page for the film "My Mothers Laptop"
The movie directed by Rupesh Paul
Starring Suresh Gopi, Padmapriya
www.laptopmovie.info

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natobasso's picture
3953 pencils

The design is very disjointed. You've got some great stuff going here, but it's all over the place. Your title needs to stand out more and be connected to the laptop and sinking man image.

It's a good start, but doesn't seem finished to me.

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Leaky Penny's picture
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The trailers page is a nightmare! Not only are the players TOO SMALL, but they all play at once!
Everything else seems cool, simple, even for all the text they contain. Homepage, meh, I like less.

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mbennett2's picture
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I don't really like how the design changes radically from the home page to the inside pages. Also, on the pages where you have a lot of informational type, it is very hard to read. If you are going to put that much stuff on one page, it needs to be organized and more user friendly.

coreyabsher's picture
2 pencils

Your design is really nice, but I feel like the space between "mother movies" and the full, opaque title (where you have a transparent copy of the title) is a remnant of some other idea that didn't pan out.

Also, around the more opaque title you now have a really clear line of delineation that makes it look as if it were just plunked down on your graphic (not plunked in water, or infused into the scene, or cleanly placed). Dither it. Maybe blowup the title a bit and marry it back to its production company.

I think it's quite good, it just needs a little tidying up. I don't know about the site itself (I agree that opening the Google Video trailers page is like stepping into the middle of a rodeo ring, where you have to suddenly accept the responsibility of pausing all the action going on). There's a lot of copy work to be done, too. A solid design on the homepage, anyway.

pokie's picture
1198 pencils

The fake bubbles on the splash page are ridiculous.

Splash page does not match inside pages.

shawnsamac's picture
9 pencils

Changing the portion of the video embed code from autoplay="true" to autoplay="false" will fix the autoplay issue...in case you were uncertain.

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