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Triple One's picture
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Las Vegas Strip Kiosk Logo - low budget quickie

This logo is going to be on business cards and t-shirts for employees only, who sell handbags and jewelry. The kiosk itself already has a generic sign with this name. This client has 2 other strip kiosks, one sells sunglasses and uses the name brand of the glasses it sells currently. the other sells candy and the logo is a brown oval with the words "Strip Candy" in pink.
The first is just a font, mostly because I like the font but couldnt come up with anything to add.
#2 is goin for the "show girl" look
#3 is a stylized handbag for the s,
and #4 could be jewelry or the chain of a handbag.
Im trying to keep this quick and simple, and would like some suggestions to narrow these down or improve on before I present these to client and earn my $100. lol

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natobasso's picture
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I think #2 is closest, but it needs to be seriously glitzed up to really work.

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Triple One's picture
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but its hard to "glitz" in black n white ;)

Ill see what else I can do.

natobasso's picture
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That's why you're a d e s i g n e r. :)
I'm talking about more flourish, detail, ornamentation specifically.

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Triple One's picture
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ok, i glitzed, i dont know why i cant find how to upload another picture without reposting, dyou know?

gwells's picture
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i like the idea of what you're doing with #3, but i don't think it's quite obvious enough. especially for the type of clientèle your client is going after. they're more 2x4 upside the head buyers than subtle.

johnwdefeo's picture
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I think #2 is the most effective, however, if you integrated your text a bit better into a chainlink, strap, etc. I think that #4 could do it.

John W. DeFeo
Brand Development & Creative Solutions
www.johnwdefeo.com

Triple One's picture
103 pencils

maybe ill keep that up my sleeve, incase I can talk them into going a little further with their budget....

3dogmama's picture
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I found your 4th too Gucci, and I'm torn between your top one and the third. However, with the top one, I would bastardize the font and have some fun with the two"Ss", the "V" and the descender of the "g". Perhaps add one set of the stylized feathers from logo 2.

ciao
3dogmama

"Art -- the one achievement of Man which has made the long trip up from all fours seem well advised." - James Thurber

Triple One's picture
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her reply:

"Hi Leslie!
All very cool and creative logos! Since the handbags and jewelry are hip, modern, and sophisticated can you do something similiar to what Coach has???"

really? yeah i coulda done that to start with and saved myself a lot of trouble!

sigh.

johnwdefeo's picture
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Such is the client-creative relationship

John W. DeFeo
Brand Development & Creative Solutions
www.johnwdefeo.com

3dogmama's picture
1991 pencils

It's a wonder she didn't give you this direction during your creative brief. Oh well, at least the upside is that you now know what she likes and you can go more the way of COACH's styling.

ciao
3dogmama

"Art -- the one achievement of Man which has made the long trip up from all fours seem well advised." - James Thurber

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