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starzarefalln's picture
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LC Babysitters

I was asked to do a logo for a babysitting service in my area. Not really sure where to go with it so let me know what you think. The tree, sun and cloud are similar to a photo they were using on their flyers. They seem to like that image so I wanted to stay with it, but you anyone has any other ideas please feel free to let me know! Thanks!

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dirkdirka's picture
14 pencils

Hey there. Well I think you have too many elements going on for a logo. You need to either narrow down the imagery or make them more of a single unit. Right now they are all separate pieces and my eye doesnt know where to begin. I think you could even just pick one of the elements and run with it. Refine your type more and then find a way to compilment the logotype with the imagery you try to use. Also think of the color palette for the logo type. Black seems to be a little harsh especially if you are trying to saying things like trustworthy, caring, friendly, etc…

I looked real quick and found a quick example of the direction you should head for developing this logo more: http://www.sixshootermedia.com/images/logos/rutland_babysitting.jpg

Hope that helps! Keep us posted!

starzarefalln's picture
34 pencils

Thanks! Funny you sent me a link to a logo like that! I am working on a second one with a sun! Ill post it when I have something refined!

Ivan's picture

Please simplify, too complex right now.

holdtheonionplease's picture
70 pencils

I think you have a good start but try reducing and simplifying it, just break it down. Good Luck.

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